Friday 11 May 2018

summer rain

                              Summer rain
I got drunk at the pub
I got ran over
I was at a funeral
I was at a different country  

I missed the bus  

3 comments:

  1. you worked really hard and you put heaps of effort in it.
    but next time try to get the words in the right place.
    from onree

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  2. nice work Riley i loved how you put it by summer Rain nice capitals letters.something you need to work on is your full stops.from Taylor

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  3. I relay loved every thing you did and I thought it was very funny next time I think you could do more. From Zoe

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